Thursday, April 14, 2016

March 11 Weekly Article

  1. Vote with your voice
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  2. http://votewithyourvoice.wix.com/vote#!content/drllj
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  3. Feedback in bullet points:

    General website:
    -I love the clean, professional look of the site. If you want this to go beyond class and gain real traction, you should seriously consider changing the URL to not include the wix portion.
    -It could be safe to assume that I (a random viewer) saw your video, and then googled your website, ready to learn more/do something to help this movement. On the homepage, maybe have some more actionable things rather than your current 3 options. Maybe like a "learn how to register or how to to vote or how can I help etc).

    Content:
    Love how connected the articles are to current issues- racism and women's rights. Maybe think about making the headlines little more catching, tell me why I should read it. Pose a question/have the point of the article clear in the headline. "Did they fight for nothing?" "The fight for women's rights is missing one important thing today." Don't get too click baity obviously, but I need some sort of bait to be motivated to click.

    If you want feedback on design I could give you a few tips that might really help. :) You want your content to be really lovely and shareable. Also, with something this fed with emotions (they fought for your right to vote) could make some really impressive picture quotes.
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